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出门在外也不愁帮忙改一下这篇英语作文,谢谢了!我怕我的作文又要重写啊!不要留情~请指出我的错误.重写当然更好啦,呵呵,我会很认真地看的.有两篇作文哦.谢谢大虾们^_^Yesterdaywas the first day of new term and the_百度作业帮
帮忙改一下这篇英语作文,谢谢了!我怕我的作文又要重写啊!不要留情~请指出我的错误.重写当然更好啦,呵呵,我会很认真地看的.有两篇作文哦.谢谢大虾们^_^Yesterdaywas the first day of new term and the weather was fine in the morning. Studentswere in the classroom early. They waited for a long time but the teacher didnot show. So they started to do something that they like. For example, Lily andTony cleaned the windows, two girls talked about their favorite singers, Pennyread a book. What about Lucy? She was drawing a picture. She is good at drawing.Time passed quickly, the teacher came. Wang Fei is a volunteer of the 2010 World Expo. Being avolunteer was his dream when he was a child. Now it becomes true. He studies Englishvery hard. He was afraid to talk with foreigners in English a year ago. But nowhe can do it! He led some foreigners visited Shanghai during May Day holiday. Thevisitors took a lot of photos. They enjoyed themselves. Wang Fei was really agood volunteer.
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Yesterdaywas,the first day of new term,and(and去掉) the weather was fine in the morning.Studentswere in the classroom early.They waited for a long time but the teacher didnot show (加上up).So they started to do something that they like.For example,Lily andTony cleaned the windows,two girls talked about their favorite singers,Pennyread a book.What about Lucy?She was drawing a picture.She is good at drawing.Time passed quickly,the teacher came.Wang Fei is a volunteer of the 2010 World Expo.Being(改为to be） avolunteer was his dream when he was a child.Now it becomes （comes）true.He studies Englishvery hard.He was afraid to talk with foreigners in English a year ago.But nowhe can do it!He led some foreigners visited (visit)Shanghai during May Day holiday.Thevisitors took a lot of photos.They enjoyed themselves.Wang Fei was really agood volunteer
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出门在外也不愁我写的一篇英语作文——帮忙修改一下，并提出宝贵意见
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World is smaller and smaller
oh, the world is so small,” says you surprsingly from time to
time. In deed, you can arrive anywhere as
can connect anyone howere far away h you can
buy any products in your hometown made in any other foreign
you can know any news at the first time taking place in
the other corner in t and etc. As far as I am concerned,
there are three reasons to explain the
First, the smaller world greatly benefits from
the development of transport industry. The importance of transport
to national economy can not be emphasized too excessively to
believe. In a morden commodity society, all products and raw
materials must be transported to consumers and the site where
manufacturing industry is located, some even abroad, by advanced
various veicleson land, at sea, and
in air. As well, passenger services offered by morden traffic are
satisfactory, for example, Jumbo airliner like Boeing 747 takes
only 14 hours to fly from Beijing to San
Francisco.
What’s more, morden communication
meansTV, telephone, and
network are another important reason for the small world. TV is a
very influential mass medium. Televesion provides the public with
information and entainment and live reports for athletic events,
such as the world cup. Telephone has become part of people’s life.
As long as you pick up the telephone, you can talk with any people
in almost every place of the globe. Internet is the most popular
resource in the coming years. Surfing net, you can browse news,
send E-mail, shop, and chat online and so
Last but not
least, globalization, of worldwide economy now more than ever, make
the world smaller. Globalization make it possible the free flow of
goods, service, capital and labour across the borders of the
world’s trading natives. In another word, globalization has helped
open the native doors.
In a word, owned the three
reasonsthe development of
transport industrymorden communication
meansand worldwide
economic globalization, our world is becoming increasingly smaller
than ever.
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