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……….., Ph.D. Professor
Laboratory of Plant Nutrition and
Ecological Environment Research,
Huazhong Agricultural University,
Wuhan, 430070, P.R.China
E-mail: .....................
Jun 10, 2009
RE:& HAZMAT-D-09-00655
Dear Editor，
We would like to thank the editor for giving us a chance to
resubmit the paper, and also thank the reviewers for giving us
constructive suggestions which would help us both in English and in
depth to improve the quality of the paper. Here we submit a new
version of our manuscript with the title “………………………”, which has
been modified according to the reviewers’ suggestions. Efforts were
also made to correct the mistakes and improve the English of the
manuscript. We mark all the changes in red in the revised
manuscript.
Sincerely yours,
……………….., Ph.D. Professor
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The following is a point-to-point response to the two reviewers’
Reviewer #1:
General&comments:
Reviewer #1: The paper presents an interesting experimental investigation to assess the photocatalytic degradation of polyethylene plastic with goethite under UV irradiation. The research work is clearly presented but the conclusions, the introduction and other parts of the paper relate the results obtained with unjustified claims about the impact of the work. In addition, the background information provided in the introduction part needs significant enrichment. In particular:
Answer: Thank you for the comments on the paper. We have revised the manuscript as suggested since we consider that some sentences or descriptions in the Conclusion part are not so accurate based on the results.&
Page 3, line 46: recycling is not available…
Even though a large amount of agricultural plastic waste in burnt or buried in the fields, some quantities of specific categories of good quality agricultural plastic waste are recycled in several countries while research efforts and projects are in progress to improve the corresponding percentage. The authors should refer to the corresponding recent literature.
Answer:Yes. Your opinions inspired us and we revised the manuscript accordingly. In the revised paper, the sentence “Recycling is not available for economy,” was changed to “In order to reduce costs, the thickness of application agriculture films in some regions in China is less than 0.005 mm result in diffcult to recycle, And because the process of recycling is expensive and time-consuming, only a small percentage of the agricultural plastic waste is currently recycled at the end of cultivation in China [4]”(Page 3 line 49-52).
Page 3, line 76: biodegradable and photodegradable….
There are developments in the area of biodegradable materials that indicate the opposite. Concerning photodegradable materials, they are not considered to represent a solution as they have not been proven to be biodegradable. The authors should refer to the corresponding recent literature.&
Answer: Thank you for reminding us the improper description on the study. We have the improper parts revised accordingly and hope that this new manuscript will be convincing ( Page 3 line 52-55).
Page 4, line 65: find an eco-friendly….
The best eco-friendly disposal for agricultural plastic waste is recycling and for non-recyclable materials, energy recovery. Degrading materials produced from fossil sources is not an eco-friendly disposal! The authors should refer to the corresponding recent literature.
Answer: Thank the reviewer for the comments. We’ve recognized that some of the descriptions in the previous copy were really not so accurate and a little bit arbitrary due to our poor English level and the study on recent literature. After consulting more references, we therefore revised paper to be more reasonable and convincing.
Page 4, line 66: to carbon dioxide and water….
Conversion of fossil oil based materials into carbon dioxide and water is much worse than converting renewable-based materials into carbon dioxide and water&
Answer: Thank the reviewer for the comments. We’ve recognized that this description in the previous copy were not accurate, due to our poor study on recent literature. The sentence “it is very important to find an eco-friendly disposal of plastic waste where they degrade to carbon dioxide and water under the sunlight irradiation without producing toxic byproducts.” has been deleted.
Page 6, line 112: volatile products….
Define the products.
Answer: We have defined the volatile products in Page 6 line 124-125.
Page 9, line 185: eco-friendly disposal….
The claims of the authors that this technique is an eco-friendly one are not justified. The conclusions and other parts of the paper need to be rewritten and limit the scope of the presented research work to the technical objectives without deriving unjustified general conclusions and claims about the impact of this work.
Answer: Thank the reviewer for the comments. We’ve recognized that this description in the previous copy were not accurate. The sentence “The development of this kind of composite polymer can lead to an eco-friendly disposal of polymer wastes.” was changed to “The present paper intends to study goethite as photocatalytst for degradating plastic. Further attention could be focused on the application of the technique.” (Page 9 line 192-194).
Reviewer #3:
1. Title and abstract should indicate that the work has been done with PE-Goethite composite film.
Answer: Your suggestion is greatly appreciated. We agree and therefore change the title to: Solid-phase photocatalytic degradation of polyethylene&goethite composite film under UV-light irradiation.
2. Please revise the first paragraph of 'Introduction'.& It is difficult to understand.& In general, the language of the paper should be revisited.
Answer: The Introduction part has been rewritten both in contents and in English. We particularly revised some sentences since they are not correct or so confusing.
3. Materials and methods - Details of the chemicals to be furnished
Answer: The reviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and the details of the chemicals has been shown in Page 4 line 79-83.
4. Characterization are required for PE (Molecular weight, grade) and Goethite prepared (particle size, BET surface area, SEM-EDS and XRD)
Answer: The reviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and the characterization for PE has been shown in Page 4 line 79. The Goethite prepared (particle size, BET surface area, SEM and XRD) has been reported by Liao et al. (2007), We clarify that in the revised manuscript in Page 5 line 91-93.
5. A schematic diagram of the experimental set up to be given
Answer: The reviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and a schematic diagram of the experimental has been given in Fig. 1 in the present paper. The original Fig. 1. was changed to Fig. 2 and Fig. 3.
6. Results - A rate equation should be proposed from the time-weight data
Answer: The reviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and the rate equation a schematic diagram of the experimental has been given in Table. 1in the present paper.
7. A few data are required to show the influence of process parameters such as goethite loading, intensity of UV radiation.
Answer: Reviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and the influence of goethite loading has been shown in Fig. 2 in the present paper. And the influence of intensity of UV radiation has been shown in Fig. 3 in the present paper. The original Fig. 2 was changed to Fig. 4 and The original Fig. 3 was changed to Fig. 5 in the present paper.
8. Until other intermediates are isolated, upto Eqn.(7) (line 162) is sufficient.
Answer: Reviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and We changed the Eqns as recommended. Eqs. (8)-(12) are deleted and Eqn.(7) was change to “&(CH2CH2)& + .OH → degradationproducts” (Page 9 line 184).
9. Figure 3 and 4: 3 pairs are required, namely (i) Only PE film before and after irradiation, (ii) PE-Goethite film (0.4wt %) - before and after irradiation (iii) PE-Goethite film (1.0 wt %) - before and after irradiation.
Answer: Reviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and the original Fig. 3 and 4 was changed to Fig .5 in the present paper.
10. Point 3 above is also applicable for . Please rearrange and clearly mark the difference between the films before and after irradiation for both SEM and FTIR results.
Answer: Thank the reviewer and editor’s for the comments. During the revision of the paper, we did a supplementary experiment got some new SEM photographs, which has been shown in Fig. 4 in the present paper. And The FTIR results has been rearranged in Fig.5 in the present paper, respectively.
11. It should be clearly mentioned in the conclusion that the degradation was more when goethite loading and intensity of light both were more
Answer: The reviewer and editor’s suggestions have been adopted and the conclusions has been changed in Page 9 line 192-198.
Dear Prof. XXXX,&
Thank you very much for your letter and the comments from the referees about our paper submitted to XXXX (MS Number XXXX).&
We have checked the manuscript and revised it according to the comments. We submit here the revised manuscript as well as a list of changes.&
If you have any question about this paper, please don’t hesitate to let me know.&
Sincerely yours,&
Resp*****e to Reviewer 1:&
Thanks for your comments on our paper. We have revised our paper according to your comments:&
1. XXXXXXX&
2. XXXXXXX&
Dear Professor ***,&
Re: An *** Rotating Rigid-flexible Coupled System (No.: JSV-D-06-***)&
Many thanks for your email of 24 Jun 2006, regarding the revision and advice of the above paper in JSV. Overall the comments have been fair, encouraging and c*****tructive. We have learned much from it.&
After carefully studying the reviewer’ comments and your advice, we have made corresponding changes to the paper. Our resp*****e of the comments is enclosed.&
If you need any other information, please contact me immediately by email. My email account is ***, and Tel.is ***, and Fax is +***.&
Yours sincerely,&
Detailed resp*****e to reviewer’s comments and Asian Editor’s advice&
Overall the comments have been fair, encouraging and c*****tructive. We have learned much from it. Although the reviewer’s comments are generally positive, we have carefully proofread the manuscript and edit it as following.&
Besides the above changes, we have corrected some expression errors.&
Thank you very much for the excellent and professional revision of our manuscript.&
The manuscript is revised submission (&&&－&&&&) with new line and page numbers in the text, some grammar and spelling errors had also been corrected. Furthermore, the relevant regulati***** had been made in the original manuscript according to the comments of reviewers, and the major revised porti***** were marked in red bold. We also responded point by point to each reviewer comments as listed below, along with a clear indication of the location of the revision.&
Hope these will make it more acceptable for publication.&
List of Major Changes:&
1).........&
2).........&
3).........&
Resp*****e to Reviewers:&
1).........&
2).........&
3).........&
Resp*****e to Reviewer XX&
We very much appreciate the careful reading of our manuscript and valuable suggesti***** of the reviewer. We have carefully c*****idered the comments and have revised the manuscript accordingly. The comments can be summarized as follows:&
Detailed resp*****es&
Dear editor XX&
We have received the comments on our manuscript entitled “XX” by XX. According to the comments of the reviewers, we have revised our manuscript. The revised manuscript and the detailed resp*****es to the comments of the one reviewer are attached.&
Sincerely yours,&
Resp*****e to Reviewer A&
Reviewer A very kindly contacted me directly, and revealed himself to be Professor Dr. Hans-Georg Geissler of the University of Leipzig. I wrote him a general resp*****e to both reviews in January 2000, followed by these resp*****es to specific points, both his own, and those of the other reviewer .&
Resp*****e to Specific Points&
What follows is a brief and cursory discussion of the various issues raised by yourself and the other reviewer. If you should revise your judgment of the validity of the theory, these points will be addressed at greater length in a new version of the paper that I would resubmit to Psychological Review.&
Resp*****e to Specific Points- Reviewer A:&
In part (1) of your critique the major complaint is that no theory is presented, which was discussed above. You continue "Regrettably, not much attention is drawn to specific differences between the chosen examples that would be necessary to pinpoint specificities of perception more precisely", and "if perceptual systems, as suggested, hler (Kindeed act on the basis of HR, there must be many more specific c*****traints involved to ensure special `veridicality' properties of the perceptual outcome", and "the difficult analytic problems of concrete modeling of perception are not even touched". The model as presented is not a model of vision or audition or any other particular modality, but is a general model to confront the alternative neural receptive field paradigm, although examples from visual perception are used to exemplify the principles discussed. The more specific visual model was submitted elsewhere, in the Orientational Harmonic model, where I showed how harmonic resonance accounts for specific visual illusory effects. As discussed above, the attempt here is to propose a general principle of neurocomputation, rather than a specific model of visual, auditory, or any other specific sensory modality. Again, what I am proposing is a paradigm rather than a theory, i.e. an alternative principle of neurocomputation with specific and unique properties, as an alternative to the neuron doctrine paradigm of the spatial receptive field. If this paper is eventually accepted for publication, then I will resubmit my papers on visual illusory phenomena, referring to this paper to justify the use of the unconventional harmonic resonance mechanism.&
In part (2) (a) of your critique you say "it is not clarified whether the postulated properties of Gestalts actually follow from this definition or partly derive from additional c*****traints." and "I doubt that any of the reviewed examples for HR can treat just the case of hler: (1961, p. 7) "Human experience in the phenomenological sense cannot yet be treated with our m and when dealing with it, we may be forced to form new concepts which at first, will often be a bit vague." Wolfgang Kthe dog cited to dem*****trate `emergence'. For this a hierarchy relation is needed." The principle of emergence in Gestalt theory is a very difficult concept to express in unambiguous terms, and the dog picture was presented to illustrate this rather elusive concept with a concrete example. I do not suggest that HR as proposed in this paper can address the dog picture as such, since this is specifically a visual problem, and the HR model as presented is not a visual model. Rather, I propose that the feature detection paradigm cannot in principle handle this kind of ambiguity, because the local features do not individually contain the information necessary to distinguish significant from insignificant edges. The solution of the HR approach to visual ambiguity is explained in the paper in the section on "Recognition by Reification" (p. 15-17) in which I propose that recognition is not simply a matter of the identification of features in the input, i.e. by the "lighting up" of a higher level feature node, but it involves a simultaneous abstraction and reification, in which the higher level feature node reifies its particular pattern back at the input level, modulated by the exact pattern of the input. I appeal to the reader to see the reified form of the dog as perceived edges and surfaces that are not present in the input stimulus, as evidence for this reification in perception, which appears at the same time that the recognition occurs. The remarkable property of this reification is that the dog appears not as an image of a canonical, or prototypical dog, but as a dog percept that is warped to the exact posture and configuration allowed by the input, as observed in the subjective experience of the dog picture. This explanation is subject to your criticism in your general comments, that "the author dem*****trates more insight than explicitly stated in assumpti***** and drawn conclusi*****". I can only say that, in Kuhn's words, sometimes it is only personal and inarticulate aesthetic c*****iderati***** that can be used to make the case.&
In the words of Wolfgang K?hler: (1961, p. 7)&
"Human experience in the phenomenological sense cannot yet be treated with our m and when dealing with it, we may be forced to form new concepts which at first, will often be a bit vague."&
Wolfgang K?hler (K?hler 1923 p. 64)&
"Natural sciences continually advance explanatory hyptotheses, which cannot be verified by direct observation at the time when they are formed nor for a long time thereafter. Of such a kind were Ampere's theory of magnetism, the kinetic theory of gases, the electronic theory, the hypothesis of atomic disinte gration in the theory of radioactivity. Some of these assumpti***** have since been verified by direct obser vation, or have at least come close to such others are still far removed from it. But physics and chemistry would have been condemned to a permanent embryonic state had they abstained
their development seems rather like a continuous effort steadily to shorten the rest of the way to the verification of hypotheses which survive this process"&
In section (2) (b) of your critique you complain that "there is no serious discussion of possible alternatives", and you mention Neo-Gibsonian approaches, PDP, Grossberg's ART model and Pribram's holographic theory. In the next version of the paper this omission will be corrected, approximately as follows. Gibson's use of the term resonance is really a metaphorical device, since Gibson offers no mechanisms or analogies of perceptual processes, but merely suggests that there is a two-way flow of information (resonance) between behavior and the environment. This is really merely a metaphor, rather than a model.&
The PDP approach does address the issue of emergence, but since the basic computational unit of the neural network model is a hard-wired receptive field, this theory suffers all the limitati***** of a template theory. The same holds for Grossberg's "Adaptive Resonance Theory", which also uses the word resonance metaphorically to suggest a bottom-up top- down matching, but in Grossberg's model that matching is actually performed by receptive fields, or spatial templates. The ART model dem*****trates the limitati***** of this approach. For the only way that a higher-level detector, or "F2 node", can exhibit generalization to different input patterns, is for it to have synaptic weights to all of the patterns to which it responds. In essence, the pattern of synaptic weights is a superposition or blurring together of all of the possible input patterns to which the F2 node should respond. In top-down priming mode therefore that F2 node would "print" that same blurred pattern back at the lower "F1 node" level, activating all of the possible patterns to which that F2 node is tuned to respond. For example if an ART model were trained to respond to an "X"-shaped feature presented at all possible orientati*****, top-down priming of this node after training would "print" a pattern of all those X-shaped features at all orientati***** superimposed, which is simply an amorphous blob. In fact, that same node would respond even better to a blob feature than to any single X feature. In the presence of a partial or ambiguous X-like pattern presented at a particular orientation, the ART model could not complete that pattern specific to its orientation. The HR model on the other hand offers a different and unique principle of representation, in which top-down activation of the higher level node can complete a partial or ambiguous input pattern in the specific orientation at which it appears, but that same priming would complete the pattern differently if it appeared in a different orientation. This generalization in recognition, but specification in completion, is a property that is unique to the harmonic resonance representation.&
Kuhn observes that the old paradigm can always be reformulated to account for any particular phenomenon addressed by the new paradigm, just as the Ptolomaic earth- centered cosmology could account for the moti***** of the planets to arbitrary precision, given enough nested cycles and epicycles of the crystal spheres. Similarly, a conventional neural network model can always be contrived to exhibit the same functional behavior of generalized recognition but specific completion described above, but only by postulating an implausible arrangement of spatial receptive fields. In this case that would require specific X-feature templates applied to the input at every possible orientation, any one of which can stimulate a single rotation-invariant X-feature node, to account for bottom-up rotation invariance in recognition. However in order to also account for top-down completion specific to orientation, top-down activation of the higher-level invariant node would have to feed back down to a set of top-down projection nodes, each of which is equipped with an X-shaped projective template at a particular orientation, able to project a complete X-shaped pattern on the input field. But the top-down completion must select only the specific orientation that best matches the pattern present in the input, and complete the pattern only at that best matching orientation. This system therefore requires two complete sets of X-feature receptive fields or templates, one set for bottom-up recognition and the other set for top-down completion, each set containing X-feature templates at every possible orientation, and similar sets of receptive fields would be required for the recognition of other shaped patterns such as "T" and "V" features. This represents a "brute force" approach to achieving invariance, which although perhaps marginally plausible in this specific example, is completely implausible as a general principle of operation of neurocomputation, given the fact that invariance appears to be so fundamental a property of human and animal perception. However, as Kuhn also observes, a factor such as neural plausibility is itself a "personal and inarticulate aesthetic c*****ideration" that cannot be determined unambiguously by the evaluative procedures characteristic of normal science.&
With regard to Pribram's Holographic theory, the concept of a hologram is closely related to a standing wave model, since it too works by interference of waveforms. The difference is that the hologram is "frozen in time" like a photograph, and therefore does not exhibit the tolerance to elastic deformation of the input, as does the standing wave model. Neither does the hologram exhibit rotation invariance as does the standing wave in a circular- symmetric system. However holograms can in principle be c*****tructed of dynamic standing waves, as Pribram himself suggests, and this concept then becomes a harmonic resonance theory. The present proposal is therefore closely related to Pribram's approach, which will be discussed in the next version of the paper.&
The discussion of alternative models was indeed a significant omission in the version of the paper you reviewed, the next version will include such a discussion, which in turn will help to clarify the operational principles of the HR theory, and distinguish it from alternative approaches.&
In section (3) of your critique you propose that "noti***** like the receptive field concept are approximate descripti***** of facts", and you propose a dualistic approach involving two forms of representati***** in the brain which are of different and complementary nature. While I do not dispute the anatomical facts of the shapes of neuron and the function of synapses, it has never been dem*****trated that a neuron actually operates as a spatial template, that theory arose as an explanation for the neurophysiological resp*****e of "feature detector" cells in the cortex. However the noisy stochastic nature of the neural resp*****e, and its very broad tuning function seem to argue against this view. My own hunch is that the feature detector behavior is itself a standing wave phenomenon, which is c*****istent with the fact that the resp*****e function of V1 cortical neur***** resembles a Gabor function, which is itself a wavelet. However this issue is orthogonal to my main point, which is that whether or not some neur***** behave as spatial templates, the limitati***** of a template theory suggest that the Gestalt properties of perception (emergence, invariance, reification, multistability) cannot be accounted for in that manner, and that some other significant principle of computation must be invoked to account for the Gestalt properties of perception.&
In section (4) you complain that there is no discussion of the limitati***** in the scope of HR. For example merely to reflect outside reality does not contribute to the problem of c*****cious awareness of these objects. However this issue is not unique to HR, it is a general philosophical issue that applies just as well to the alternative Neuron Doctrine model. But the Neuron doctrine itself cannot even plausibly account for the reflection of outside reality in an internal representation, due to the problems of emergence, reification, and invariance, which is why the Neuron Doctrine suggests a more abstracted concept of visual representation, in which the visual experience is encoded in a far more abstracted and abbreviated form. Therefore although HR does not solve the "problem of c*****ciousness" completely, it is one step closer to a solution than the alternative. The philosophical issue of c*****ciousness however is beyond the scope of this paper, which is a theory of neural representation, rather than a philosophical paper. I enclose a copy of my book, "The World In Your Head", which addresses these philosophical issues more extensively.&
Professor Geissler's Resp*****e&
Professor Geissler kindly responded to my letter in April 2000 to say that he agreed with nearly everything I had said. He then gave me advice about the presentation of the idea. He recommended that I begin by describing the Neuron Doctrine in detail, and then point out the limitati***** of the idea before presenting the Harmonic Resonance theory as an alternative. I re-wrote the paper following Geissler's advice, and I included some ideas from the above letter in the new version of the paper. However it was too late to resubmit it to Psychological Review since the editor who was handling the paper was leaving. Furthermore, I am becoming convinced that the proper medium for presenting radically new and different theories is the open peer review format of the Behavioral and Brain Sciences journal, which is where I submitted the revised version of this paper.&
Dear Dr. S. Heller,&
Attached please the revised manuscript " A Group-Decision Approach for Evaluating Educational Web Sites" submitted to computers & Education for possible publication. A file containing the revision summary is also attached. Your acknowledgement will be highly appreciated.&
Thank you.&
Sincerely yours&
Gwo-Jen Hwang&
Information Management Department&
National Chi Nan University&
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Resp*****e to Reviewers and Editor&
Paper#: SMCC-03-06-0056&
Title: On the Development of a Computer-Assisted Testing System with Genetic Test Sheet-Generating Approach&
[Reviewer 1 Comments]:&
____ The paper should be shortened.&
[Resp*****e to Reviewer 1]:&
The paper has been shortened to 24 pages by removing some redundant descripti***** of genetic m moreover, Secti***** 3 and 4 have been re-written to condense the entire paper.&
[Reviewer 2 Comments]:&
No innovative contribution was found both in the theory of genetic algorithms and in the application of them.&
[Resp*****e to Reviewer 2]:&
(1)_We have re-written the abstract and Secti***** 1 and 2 to explain the importance about the c*****truction of a good test sheet. The major contribution of this paper is not in its technical part. Instead, we tried to cope with an important problem arising from real educational applicati*****. Such a problem is known to be critical and has not been efficiently and effectively solved before.&
(2)_Since the innovative contribution of this paper might not be significant, we have re-written the paper as a technical correspondence based on the editor's suggestion.&
[Reviewer 3 Comments]:&
Make the definiti*****, formulas, and other descripti***** clearer and more precise, so that the revised paper will be improved in its readability and correctness.&
[Resp*****e to Reviewer 3]:&
Te mixed integer models and the genetic algorithms in Secti***** 3 and 4 have been re-written to make the definiti*****, formulas, and other descripti***** clearer and more precise (please refer to Pages 6-17). Moreover, a colleague who is an English expert has carefully checked the paper to correct potential grammatical errors.
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