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范文hard work and happiness life
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what is a happiness life ?someone think sprit is ,more others think material life is .everybody knows that you can get more while you have to pay too much.so you need hard work.working-hard ,not only raising your ability but also knowledge,and someone will recognize the worth of you, raise you.and then you will have a great future. it is successful for you that material life is advanced,spirit also is developed .what
will you get? of course, a cool life.you see,hard -working is basic and necessary factor . it is so important for us to creat
happiness life.
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　　日雅思A类大作文题目：Some people think the success of life is based on hard work and
determination but others think there are more important factors like money or
personal appearance. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (words=263
　　日雅思A类大作文题目解析：
　　一些人认为成功的生活基于努力的工作以及决定但是其他人认为有更重要的因素例如资金和人的外貌.讨论彼此观点给出你的观点
　　关键词分析：
　　背景关键词：success of life ,
　　论点关键词：
　　hard work determination ——success of life
　　money, personal appearance ——success of life
　　第一段： 社会背景+正向/反向观点+自己观点 (1 客观因素/外因 2 主观因素/内因)
　　社会背景： 平衡式的成功的生活——意味——目标的达成+现实生活的幸福感
　　正向观点：一些人认为——钱与个人长相——实现成功生活——更重要的因素。
　　自己观点： 我认为 理想的生活状态的达成主要基于1 勤奋的工作 2 明智的选择
　　A successful balanced life is a life of goal attainment and joy. Some
people deem that to realize a successful life is closely related with money and
people’s physical features. After serious consideration, I am convinced that the
realization of such ideal life is mainly based on industrious work and wise
choices.=52
　　第二段：论点+论据+例证+结论
　　论点： 勤奋工作——取得——幸福与成就的必经途径。
　　论据： 没有执着努力的付出——不会有——丰厚的回报。
　　例证： 任何一个实现财富自由，幸福人生的成功人士，都以勤勉务实的态度，坚持不懈的努力，克服障碍，达成目标。
　　结论：勤勉的工作——起了至关重要的作用——实现理想的生活。
　　To begin with, assiduous work is an inevitable pathway to gain happiness
and accomplishment. Undeniably, without persistent efforts, a profitable return
can fail to gain. For instance, every successful person who has obtained
financial freedom and happiness in life conquers obstructions to reach their
goals via sedulous and pragmatic efforts. Hence, diligent work plays an
essential role in carrying out a desired life. =63
　　第三段： 论点+论据+例证+结论
　　论点：明智的选择——决定着人生的幸福与否的方向
　　论据: 选择不对——努力白费。
　　例证： 选择适合的行业，正确的工作，才能发挥人的最大潜能，获得工作中的快乐，和幸福美满的生活
　　结论：正确的选择——是——影响人生成败的关键。
　　Secondly, advisable choices can determine whether one’s life is happy or
not. In other words, incorrect choices may lead to all efforts in vain. For
example, choosing a befitting career and appropriate work can help a person play
out his full potential, and furthermore, acquire happiness from work and
eudemonia from life. From this point, proper selections are the key to deciding
one’s life is a success or failure.=63
　　第四段：
　　让步段：另一种观点合理性+however+对此观点反驳
　　另一种观点合理性：
　　钱和外貌也可以影响一个人的生活上的成功
　　原因：1 金钱可以——带来——保障与快乐
　　2外貌——1)吸引力 2)找到更好的伴侣
　　反驳观点：
　　成功生活——根本因素
　　原因1坚忍不拔的意志力以及持续不断的努力
　　2做出从事适合自己的行业的明智决定+影响人生方向的决定
　　Admittedly, Wealth and physical features are also considered significant
elements for success in individual life. Wealth can bring security and
happiness, while charming appearances can bring preferable partners. However,
successful livelihood is relied on some fundamental elements which contain
constant efforts, fortitudinous willpower, and rational decisions as to one’s
career and directions in life.=54
　　总结观点：
　　第五段：总结观点+提出建议
　　总结观点：认真踏实的工作 +影响人生的关键选择——是幸福美满人生——的根本所在
　　提出建议：金钱 +相貌 仅仅是影响——平衡式的成功生活的辅助的因素
　　In brief, earnest surefooted work and vital sensible choices are vital
factors to happiness in life. Meanwhile, money and personal looks are only
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