帮我检查下这篇英语作文有没有语法上的错误,谢了 _百度作业帮
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帮我检查下这篇英语作文有没有语法上的错误,谢了
帮我检查下这篇英语作文有没有语法上的错误,谢了&
he takes a bus应该改为he takes the buswhen it's a rainy day可以直接写为when it rains,并且前面不用加逗号其他就没有错误了,
1、friend后加个who，你这种写法叫从句，从句前必须有个引导词。2、第二句我认为用“His home is about six kilometers from school.————It‘s so far”会更好3、“It's a rainy day”改为“It's raining”请问这句话有语法错误吗?谢谢
在沪江关注日语的沪友know1遇到了一个关于日语教程的疑惑，已有2人提出了自己的看法。
知识点疑惑描述：
病院へ診察を受けに行こうと思う
薬を食べようにもよくない
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第一句没问题，很好。
想要去医院接受检查。
第二句不知道你想要说什么
如果说你想说“想吃药是不好的”（？）
薬を食べようとするのはよくない。
但是我觉得这个句意是有问题的……
—— vanhelen
即使吃药病也不好---------薬を飲んでも、病気はよくならない
—— lxywy
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CopyRight & 沪江网 2015&求英语高手帮我看看这篇作文有没有语法上的错误。_百度知道
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Because I can play the guitar.I like English teacher best.
This is my school life.I am very happy,art and more,I usually play chess with my friend.Because I think it’s relaxing.At school.My favorite subject is music,because I think it’s interesting,math.Because I think it’s very difficult,but I can’t play it well.So I want to learn
about music,Miss Chen.And I also like English,Linda,English.I want to join the music club.I don’t like science,Chinese.She is very funnyMy School LifeI have many classes in our school
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I have many classes in our school：Because I can play the guitar.第五句.没什么大问题,but not very well,my English teacher,such as English.倒数第四句,Arts and etc(表示“诸如此类”“等等”的意思），who is very funny,Math：I like Miss Chen best,Chinese注意学科单词首字母大写第一句，很不错的一篇文章~~~轻松有趣
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)I have many classes in our school,(there are )English,math,Chinese,art and more.My favorite subject is music.Because I think it’s relaxing.And I also like English,because I think it’s interesting.I like English teacher best,Miss Chen.She is very funny.I don’t like science.Because I think it’s very difficult.(　）At school,I usually play chess with my friend,Linda.I want to join the music club.Because I can play the guitar,but I can’t play it well.So I want to learn
about music.
This is my school life.I am very happy!
math数学M应该大写 favorite应该为favourite music club最好大写
She is very funny.funny这词用的不好改成：humour:幽默。文章大体无语法错误。
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出门在外也不愁请问这篇短文有语法错误吗,有的话,指出来, _百度作业帮
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请问这篇短文有语法错误吗,有的话,指出来,
请问这篇短文有语法错误吗,有的话,指出来,&
play ＋s最后一句错了 你可以换成：Do you think i'm lovely?（是同一个意思）}