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我写的一篇英语作文帮麻烦修改下,看下哪些句子有语法错误,哪些句子写的不好,写的部好麻烦帮我改下.我英语成绩非常烂,麻烦修改详细点啊千万不要像语法书上那样讲我看不懂My schoolMy school was very terrible.turning on the light is not allowed in the daytime.Some students wan to turn on the light.because the eyes of them was not good and （看不清黑板）.（如果我们把打开了 被学校发现就会罚款）The WC of school was very very terrible.No water and nobody clean.Eery time I went there want to vomit.Many teachers of school was not duty to us.So many students’ grades was very terrible amd they always got a D this term.我英语老师部管我们,我好跑到这里来了.这是我今天上课发牢骚写的.内容是真实的哦括号里面的句子是我不会写的
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the eyes of them改成their eyesigt他们的视力（eyes是复数,was是单数.搭配错误）very very可改成sonobody clean改成nobody to cleanevery time改成each time（这是正常搭配）Many teachers of school
was not duty to us中was改成were（主语是老师们,谓语应该用复数)duty to us改成on duty值日、在职So many students’ grades was 改成many students' grades are all terrible看不清黑板：they cannot watch the blackboard closely如果我们开灯被学校发现就会罚款：if we turned on lights,we will be fined by our school我好不容易打好的,希望同学可以认真看一下.其实英语学习还在于自己,加油!
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麻烦英语高手帮我修改下这句句子!原文：我们保证一收到你的银行汇票就在7天之内装运,并在装运完毕后通知你运送日期.我是这么写的：We are pleased to be able to guaratee shipment of the goods within 7 days your order as soon as we will receive your bank draf,and we also will tell you shipping date after shipment of the goods finish.麻烦高手们看下我这样写对不对,哪里还可以改一下,使句子更好!
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We guaratee shipping within 7 days and informing you of the date when complete the shippment on receiving your bank draf
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we assure to pack your cargo within 7days after receiving your bank draf,we will notice you the shipment after packing.
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英语句子改错,麻烦找出错误后帮订正he pets and peole will be friendlywith pets play game is very happypeople spend time with animals can help people lives more funnot supposed them to hurt people5.i think keeping pets have some good ways and some bad ways
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1.【His】pets will be friendly【to people】.2.【Playing game with pets】 is very happy.3.【Spending time】with animals can help people 【live】 more fun.4.【They are not supposed to】 hurt people.
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