下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的下方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个符号（^）_百度知道请修改以下短文：文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在该词下面写出修改的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一条横线（_），并在该词下面写出修改的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Joe,I’m sorry to hear that you want to give up apply for a volunteer for the 2013 National Games. In my opinion, you’d better not give up this idea. On the one hand, you have many advantage. First of all, you are good at communicating others and ready to help others. In addition to, you are familiar with Shenyang. Secondly, bea volunteer can broaden your outlook and improved yourself, that will be beneficial to yourfuture work and life. Therefore, I sincere hope you can seize this chance and try your best tobe a outstanding volunteer. Please consider my advice. I’m really looking forward to your reply.Yours, Jane
小题1:apply—applying小题2:删掉not小题3:advantage—advantages 小题4:communicating∧with小题5:删掉to小题6:be—being
小题7:improved—improve小题8:that—which小题9:sincere—sincerely小题10:a—an
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扫描下载二维码下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Today is my father’s birthday. To celebrate his birthday, I went to a shop and choose a present for him. After that, I went home by the train. On the way, I was imagining how happily my father would be when he accepted the present. The train got to the next stop before I knew it. An old lady got the train. Every seat was taken, but she had to stand with two heavy bags in both of her hand.After an immediate hesitation（犹豫）, I gave my seat to her and he was grateful for all what I did.In my opinion, give others a hand whenever they are in trouble not only brings happiness to the ones who receive it but also to the ones who give it.
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the 小题3: happily 改成happy小题4: accepted 改成received小题5:get后面加on小题6: but 改成So小题7: hand 改成hands小题8:He改成she小题9: what 改成that小题10: give 改成giving
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