哪位高手帮我改一下我文章里面哪有错误.比如说语法或句子.特急He should not join in some national motel chain because that costs too much money for him.He should try to lower his price to beat the competitors.This is one thing_百度作业帮
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哪位高手帮我改一下我文章里面哪有错误.比如说语法或句子.特急He should not join in some national motel chain because that costs too much money for him.He should try to lower his price to beat the competitors.This is one thing
哪位高手帮我改一下我文章里面哪有错误.比如说语法或句子.特急He should not join in some national motel chain because that costs too much money for him.He should try to lower his price to beat the competitors.This is one thing that is foremost in every traveler's mind as soon as he or she begins planning a vacation.1.Will we be able to get the best hotel deals?2.Will the hotel be good?3.Are we paying the best possible price for this accommodation?4.Where should we search to get the most affordable hotel deal?First of all,he should engaged in customer needs analysis,system design and project management work in customer demand analysis.If there are more people like spa or massage,he needs to add a spa and massage in his motel.He can consider doing some advertising on the highway when most people drive to the highway can see that,also a lot of couple like romantic vacation ,let them get right price and ensure highest level of customer service can enjoy in his motel.He should understand if the loyalty customers have other needs,she should try to make them satisfaction which could make the customers comfortable and avoid the profit to cut down.Meanwhile he won't take the risk of losing loyalty customers.On the other hand,this may attract more and more customers in the future.
改过的我用大写标出了,你自己再检查遍吧.He should not join in some national motel chain,WHICH costs too much money for him.He should try to lower his price to beat the OTHER competitors.This is one thing that is foremost in every traveler's mind as soon as he or she begins planning a vacation.1.Will we be able to get the best hotel deals?2.Will the hotel be good?3.Are we paying the best SUITABLE price for this accommodation?4.Where should we search to get the most affordable hotel deal?First of all,he should FOCUS ON customer'S needs analysis,system design and project management work in customer demand analysis.If there are more people like spa or massage,he needs to add a spa and massage in his motel.He can consider MAKING some ADVERTISEMENTS on the highway when most people drive ON the highway can see IT,also a lot of coupleS like romantic vacationS ,let them ENJOY A highest level of customer service AT A PROPER PRICE,WHICH can MAKE his motel POPULAR.He should understand if the LOYAL customers have other needs,HE should try to make them SATISFIED which CAN make the customers comfortable and avoid the profit DONING down.Meanwhile he won't take the risk of losing LOYAL customers.On the other hand,this may attract more and more customers in the future.英语语法题目,求解答.要从四个选项里面选出一个错误的选项.另外请分析句子中有没有错误的地方.To grasp the magnitude of the vandalism that has been commited, imagine every square inch of the Taj Mahal or St. Peter'_百度作业帮
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英语语法题目,求解答.要从四个选项里面选出一个错误的选项.另外请分析句子中有没有错误的地方.To grasp the magnitude of the vandalism that has been commited, imagine every square inch of the Taj Mahal or St. Peter'
英语语法题目,求解答.要从四个选项里面选出一个错误的选项.另外请分析句子中有没有错误的地方.To grasp the magnitude of the vandalism that has been commited, imagine every square inch of the Taj Mahal or St. Peter's Square covered from spray paint and graffiti.A.to grasp；B.has been；C.every；D.covered from；E.no error.
本题中,答案应该选择D.covered from.因为它是错误的选项.该句子正确的表达应该是：To grasp the magnitude of the vandalism that has been committed,（省略了主语you ）imagine every square inch of the Taj Mahal or St.Peter's Square covered with spray paint and graffiti.句子中,covered with spray paint and graffiti被喷漆涂鸦所覆盖.cover with 用…遮盖住,用…填满；被（感情）所压倒；配上.cover from：盖.
您好！要从四个选项里面选出一个错误的选项，答案应该是D.covered from。该句子正确的表达应该是：To grasp the magnitude of the vandalism that has been committed，（you/we
can/may）imagine every square inch of the Taj Mahal or St. P...
D啊。 covered with才对。
选C应该是each of而不是every of帮我修改一下我的英语演讲稿包括常识上的错误 语法句子的错误 内容 结构 还有句子地不地道等 My presentation today is mainly about recreation,recreation is the time spent to do things that will refresh your mind and_百度作业帮
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帮我修改一下我的英语演讲稿包括常识上的错误 语法句子的错误 内容 结构 还有句子地不地道等 My presentation today is mainly about recreation,recreation is the time spent to do things that will refresh your mind and
帮我修改一下我的英语演讲稿包括常识上的错误 语法句子的错误 内容 结构 还有句子地不地道等 My presentation today is mainly about recreation,recreation is the time spent to do things that will refresh your mind and body in a healthy and positive way.For example:RecreationFitness and SportsTravelDanceMusicTelevision the most popular recreational activities is fitness and sports体育有分几大类 分别是：Aerobic activitiesConditioning activitiesStrength activitiesIndividual sportsRacquet sportsTeam sportsOutdoor sportsWater sportsA trend in the U.S is that people are getting more health conscious.So are exercising more for fitness.They are doing some sports ,such as BowlingRunning/Jogging Treadmill ExerciseStretchingFishing campingHiking Walking for FitnessBilliards/PoolBoxingDartsGolforseback RidingIce Skating Martial ArtsRoller SkatingScooter Riding Skateboarding And some of the most popular sports based on attendance are Football,basketball,Baseball.Hockey.Soccer.Today more and more girls are beginning to participate in sports,they may play soccer,volley ball,some play basketball,they also watch sports games,but not as many girls watch as guys.The proportion is about two to three times as many guys watch sports as girls.It used to be that it was considered un-feminine for girls to be involved with sports...but that has changed...
Hello everyone,my presentation today is mainly about recreation,【which】is the time spent to do things that will refresh your mind and body in a healthy and positive way.For example:Recreation,Fitness and Sports,Travel,Dance,Music,Television【,and so on.】The most popular recreational activities 【are】 fitness and sports.【Sports fall into serval catalogs as below：】 Aerobic activities,Conditioning activities,Strength activities,Individual sports,Racquet sports,Team sports,Outdoor sports,Water sports【,and so forth.】【Currently,there is a trend in the U.S】that people are getting more health conscious【,so they】 are exercising more for fitness.【The common sports people usually do are:】Bowling ,Running/Jogging ,Treadmill Exercise ,Stretching ,Fishing ,camping ,Hiking ,Walking for Fitness ,Billiards/Pool ,Boxing ,Darts ,Golf ,orseback Riding 【这里如果指的是起码的话,可以用equestrian】,Ice Skating ,Martial Arts ,Roller Skating ,Scooter Riding,Skateboarding,and some of the most popular sports that require teamworking are Football,basketball,Baseball,Hockey,and Soccer.Today more and more 【ladies】are beginning to participate in sports,【such as】 soccer,volley ball,【and】 basketball.They also watch sports games,【although not as many as men】.【The male audience is about two to three times as many as female audience.】 It was once considered to be improper for ladies to be involved in sports,but this has changed now.建议：楼主的listing太多,这样造成的后果一是读起来听众会觉得很无聊,再者也会令整篇文章的内容显得有点苍白.可以多结合一下实际的例子来阐述现况,譬如可以说说地方之间的受欢迎运动的不同：美国喜欢篮球、棒球、美式足球；英国足球最狂热,但是没人打篮球；中国乒乓球是国球,羽毛球、跳水等世界第一……然后可以分析一下为什么会出现这种现象.原因可以从场地、人文文化、体育发展趋势等方面来辩论.
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My presentation today is mainly about recreation，recreation is the time spent to do things that will refresh your mind and body in a healthy and positive way. For example: FitnessRecreation ...
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润色： Hello, everyone! My presentation today is mainly about recreation. Recreation means you spend time on what will refresh your mind and body in a healthy and positive way. For example: Rec...
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My presentation today is mainly about recreation，(which can be defined as)the time spent to do things that will refresh your mind and body in a healthy and positive way. For example: the most pop...
你好~ 我是美国学校的学生, 以下的修改希望会对你帮助:My presentation today is mainly about recreation. Recreation is the time spent on doing things that will refresh your mind and body in a healthy and positive way. doin...
不好意思，我心有余力不足啊~一篇关于游泳的英文稿.要求：1.请按着所给中文翻译2.尽量少出现语法上的错误3.每句英文翻译后面最好附上中文.例如：I love swimming(我喜欢游泳)4.在我所给的中文前,请附上这种运动怎样玩(_百度作业帮
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一篇关于游泳的英文稿.要求：1.请按着所给中文翻译2.尽量少出现语法上的错误3.每句英文翻译后面最好附上中文.例如：I love swimming(我喜欢游泳)4.在我所给的中文前,请附上这种运动怎样玩(
一篇关于游泳的英文稿.要求：1.请按着所给中文翻译2.尽量少出现语法上的错误3.每句英文翻译后面最好附上中文.例如：I love swimming(我喜欢游泳)4.在我所给的中文前,请附上这种运动怎样玩(用英文哦.)中文:游泳是一项有益身心的运动.游泳不仅可以保持身体健康,而且还可以控制情绪.更重要的是,游泳被作为一种爱好.但是,游泳也是有害处的,例如,容易溺水.而且游泳所产生的传染病,也是目前一个比较严峻的问题.
Swim for being one to motion having the benefit body and mind. Swim for being able to keep keep healthy not only, and can control a mood. More important being , have a swim are one kind of hobby. But, swim for being also a harmful place's , for example , easy drowning. Infectious disease produced by have a swim and, is also austere problem one comparing at present.
Swimming is a good mental and physical exercise. Swimming can not only keep healthy, but also can control your emotions. More importantly, swimming is a hobby. However, there is also harm to swim, for example, easily drown. And swimming, but also generated at an infectious disease serious problems.谁能帮我找一下这些英语句子的语法错误?If I can,I wanna be with you.For the future,for you,for myself,I will try my best to go with you.[br/]I will study hard.for myself for you.[br/]In the near future.I will make you believe:At our a_百度作业帮
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谁能帮我找一下这些英语句子的语法错误?If I can,I wanna be with you.For the future,for you,for myself,I will try my best to go with you.[br/]I will study hard.for myself for you.[br/]In the near future.I will make you believe:At our a
谁能帮我找一下这些英语句子的语法错误?If I can,I wanna be with you.For the future,for you,for myself,I will try my best to go with you.[br/]I will study hard.for myself for you.[br/]In the near future.I will make you believe:At our age,you can find one who will stay with you forever .[br/]Perhaps,I shouldn't promised too much ,but I am able to do my best with my best efforts.
I want to be with you if i can.(wanna 是口语,不能用,这个句子倒过来念比较顺.）I will try my best to go with you(请问是想表达和你一起走得意思么?）,for you,for myself,and for the future.(这样讲比较动情）I will study hard and will make you believe that ,you can find your Mr.right at our age,who will be staying with you forever.Perhaps I shouldn`t promise you too much ,but I will try my best(这几个和前面一样我就不说明了哈,perhaps后面断句很怪.）}